One of the things that my group and I thought would be helpful would be to get a group of people, let them watch our thriller and then give us feedback on what was good/ what to improve.
Some of criticisms we received and one of the most popular view was that they didn't get our intended reading, as they thought the actor killed himself afterwards, not getting the view of him threatening the police with the gun. However, they all did agree that if it was a full film, they would of understand the next scene and realised what our actor was doing.
A lot of positive feedback was related to mise en scene as everybody commented on how well our room looked like a motel room and little details were noticed like the fire safety sign at the back of the door. They also commented on the lighting and how they thought it looked very realistic but could of had another colour to add to the street lamp.
Another positive was towards our overall editing and sound as they thought the sound effects used were useful in telling the story and really built up the tension whilst the editing was slick and quick.
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